Tuesday, November 18, 2008

A Visit To The NAPPERS Hotel


(four character story)
Lucus Montana was a millionaire from Missouri. He decided to go on vacation on a trip around the World. He was now in Washington where his Half brother, Jack Stans, lived. Lucus stopped at a hotel near his brother residence. The hotel was called The NAPPERS. It looked like a well-kept place but the manager at the front desk was very strange.(picture to the right) He always had a nervous expression on his face at all times of the day.
When it was Lucus’s turn to check in, the man said” hello my name is Peter Downs. I am the hotel manager here…” He paused for a second. “Are you a cop”, he asked. That seemed very weird to Lucus but he kindly said no and went up to his room.
When he was settled down and unpacked he decided to call his brother so they could meet up. His brother sounded very different on the phone. Usually he would be surprised his brother was in town, this time he showed no emotion at all. Something was clearly wrong. They decided to meet up at a local restaurant.
When they both arrived, it was like they have not been away from each other at all. Lucus could still sense something was bothering Jack.
Lucus asked, “What’s wrong Jack, do you need something again?”
“Yeah, I need 15,000 dollars”, Jack said calmly.
“15,000 dollars, you still owe me 12,000 from last year”, Lucus screamed.
“But this time its different, I……”, Lucus interrupted him.
“I don’t care, you’ll never stop gambling. You need help. I’m not going to be your safety net anymore”, he yelled as he stormed out of the restaurant. What Lucus doesn’t realize is that this time it’s more serious and Jack’s girlfriend has been kidnapped and is being held hostage. If he doesn’t get the people their money, she will die.
When Lucus arrives back at his hotel, the manager isn’t at the front desk. He walks up the stairs to his room but down the hall he can hear screaming. It carries on for about a minute then all of a sudden it stops and the manager appears out of the room the screaming was coming from. The manager walks past Lucus and gives him an odd look. He decides to find out what the screaming was all about later that night.
When night comes he is ready to go. He tip toes down to the room. He presses his ear to he door and can hear a faint scream. He breaks down the door and inside tide up is his brothers girlfriend. He unties her and picks her up because she is weak but when he turns around the manager is standing there with a gun. He shoots them both in the head. Then he gets in his car and rides off. Jack hears about this incident on the news and commits suicide. They all meet up in heaven.

4 comments:

Andrew McD said...

hahahah thats funny

eric said...

wtf i thought it was gonna end nice then they all meet up in heaven lol

Anonymous said...

ha, nice ending, unexpected but kinda funny

stefan d said...

that was so funny and unexpected.